I loved this story, it reminded me of the "The Eye", the movie from Hong Kong -https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0325655/ Have you seen it??

I like this telling of the story though, that the donor is still alive and had been blind before, that was spooky! I could see this becoming an even bigger story, or at least, I was into the story enough, I wish there was more! Great job!